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The amount of information that needs to be entered into the database 
is enormous, and it needs to be entered in a different way for each patient. 
This will make the design process complex."

問題所在?

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此示例使用指示代詞(如 this、these 或 those),但有兩個或更多可能的先行詞。代詞指的是哪一個?

請考慮以下示例

The new equipment arrived yesterday, and everything is in 
working order. This was something of a surprise.

哪個令人驚訝?是裝置到達了,還是它處於工作狀態,或者兩者兼而有之?

如何解決這個問題

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提供一個澄清的名詞

The new equipment arrived yesterday, and everything is in working order. 
This happy outcome was something of a surprise.
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